Monday 2 July 2018

Boring and Interesting sentences

I have been working on boring sentences by fixing them up with my own interesting words. Here's an example:

Boring:
I ate an orange. It was yum.

Interesting:
My teeth bit into a juicy, ripe orange. My taste buds exploded with flavour. It was the most scrumptious orange I had ever eaten. 

I hope you like my work :)

2 comments:

  1. Someone different who is TOTALLY not kayla2 July 2018 at 16:30

    Can you do this?
    Boring:
    I saw a person. I think it was a man.
    Interesting:
    ???

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  2. So much more interesting than the first sentence!

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